"Navarro's Promise" by Lora Leigh

Pros: The book is built on an interesting concept.
Cons: There is very little explanation about the Breeds and how they fit into the world around them; as a first time reader in this series it can be very confusing.
Rating: 2 out of 5

Advanced review copy courtesy of Penguin Group
Expected publication date: April 5, 2011


All her life, Micah has grown up with the Breeds and fantasized about Navarro Blaine. They haven’t spent much time together, but they’re thrown into proximity when her life is suddenly in danger. Now the two of them can no longer deny their attraction, but what will happen when Micah tries to resist the mating process? Will they find happiness, or will stubborn pride get in the way?


Having never read a Breeds novel, I was looking forward to reviewing Ms. Leigh’s latest, Navarro’s Promise, since I’ve had friends recommend her to me. Unfortunately, this book didn’t quite live up to the praise for me because Ms. Leigh seems to assume that by now her readers know how her world works. This made for a very confusing read for me, and I know that detracted a great deal from my enjoyment. This is definitely one of those series where new readers should start at the beginning.

From the get-go, I was struggling to understand exactly what the Breeds were, how they came to be, and why so much of the world seemed to dislike them. Because of that, some of the plot elements lacked suspense because I couldn’t understand why they were happening. Not having a good sense of what the Breeds are also made it difficult to understand the mating process, and why elements of the process happened as they did. It just seemed that the more I read, the more confused I became, and as a reader that’s pretty frustrating.

The concept for the Breeds seems an interesting one; I’ve always been a sucker for genetic manipulation and seeing how human and animal elements are fused to create something new is always interesting to me. (Not to mention how people react to those sorts of things being done.) I just wish I had  more background information so that I could really enjoy the way that the concept was put together.

Ms. Leigh’s writing style is also probably not for everyone. If you’re a reader that prefers leaner prose, then you might want to look elsewhere. It’s not a negative for me, it’s just not a writing style that I read particularly often. With that being said, as soon as I got into the flow of the book I stopped noticing it. What I did notice in a few places was a tendency to first show the reader how the character was feeling, and then follow that with a point blank telling of said feelings. That was a bit off-putting.

I also had trouble at times with the characters and their behavior. I couldn’t help but feel that Micah could solve some of her problems by sitting down and talking about them, instead of avoiding people. Some of the conflict would have seemed less gratuitous that way. Navarro could also learn to talk out conflict, but what irritated me the most was an incident where he basically threatens someone trying to help him. What really floored me was the text that follows that incident, where it seems that an attempt is made to justify his actions. (Pointing out that someone has been traumatized does not qualify as a reason to threaten them, in my opinion.)

While I found the concept of this book interesting, trying to understand the basic background of the story with little to no explanation was absolutely frustrating, and I know that the lack of context colored how I saw the book. If the concept of the series looks like something that you might be interested in, I would highly recommend starting at the beginning so that you’ll be able to catch all of the threads and undercurrents in this book.

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4 comments on “"Navarro's Promise" by Lora Leigh
  1. heather says:

    I definitely enjoyed the first three breed novels I read, but for me they’ve gone downhill since then. I figured I’d put this one in your stack in case you’d enjoy it, since I’ve stopped reading them.

    Honestly, having read the previous books only somewhat alleviates the context problem. I still found a lot of the “science” and background confusing, sketchy and arbitrary. It’s heavily science fantasy rather than science fiction, so I don’t think it would necessarily be fulfilling when it comes to that love of genetic engineering themes.

    Not to mention that it seems as though most of the characters at this point are only kept apart by their own overblown tempers and unwillingness to listen to each other, which I can only deal with for so long.

  2. Jenn says:

    Navarros Promise was not my fav but I get needing it to move on but here is my real question, did I get a bad print? In the end I have Mica leaving the labs and I turn the page and they have just made love with Broadamore in her room with gun??? Did I miss something?

  3. Sally says:

    Amen! I actually skipped through most of her sex parts, because lets face it, once you’ve read one scene from her, you’ve read them all. But my biggest upset was the end of the book! I’m with you Jenn as my book did the same thing. Mica was 4 stories below in the lab and then suddenly they are finishing up yet another bout of sex with the bad guy suddenly in their room and you have NO idea who the spy was, only that they were ‘taken care of.’ What happened??

  4. kiah says:

    personally this is the first and only book i have read of the series and i enjoyed it well enough. the storyline to it was rather enjoyable and had an interesting concept to it.
    @ sally and jenn
    it took me a while to understand as to how she got to her bedroom from the basement. but if you look back to page 300 on the third line it clearly states “long moments later” it does get confusing but my guess is ms lora got slightly rushed or lazy in that part.
    from the books i have read in this jurisdiction. it made my top ten in the least. it is a good read, being sexual, that slight touch of forbiden love, and always that canny ‘other’ trying to get in the way.

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